5/24/11

Today we had Western Civ class first. We had our rough draft of our paper due. Mr. Schick talked to us about the paper. He also answered my question I had about Julius Caesar. I had my paper peer reviewed by Cole Alban, Madi Day, and Rachel Weskalnies. My title on my paper is very boring. I have to fix the title. No one is going to want to read a paper with a boring title. You wouldn't go to the movies to see a movie with a boring title. I have to add more facts in my paper too. I really hope my paper turns out well. I have worked really hard on it.